We were learning to to write our own facts that we got off the internet and then put it into my own words.
I found hard the time but that was just my fault and I also found a bit hard re-wording what I found on the internet.
Hi Dakota, my name is Noah as you may already know from your comment on my blog. I REALLY liked your report but maybe next time if you do something like this than you could do a news report and video it. If you did that then people might be a bit more interested. But its up to you.
Kia Ora Dakota, I'm Nadia from St Patrick's in Greymouth, Your report is very interesting, I also like the amount of detail you added. Maybe next time though you could maybe add some more photos to your presentation to make it a bit brighter.
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ReplyDeleteHi Dakota,
ReplyDeletemy name is Noah as you may already know from your comment on my blog.
I REALLY liked your report but maybe next time if you do something like this than you could do a news report and video it.
If you did that then people might be a bit more interested.
But its up to you.
Blog ya later.
Kia Ora Dakota,
ReplyDeleteI'm Nadia from St Patrick's in Greymouth,
Your report is very interesting, I also like the amount of detail you added. Maybe next time though you could maybe add some more photos to your presentation to make it a bit brighter.
Blog ya latter!!!