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Wednesday, 24 May 2017

Tuna inquiry come check it out

I hope you like our tuna report eels are really interesting to learn about. Our class is learning about tuna(eel) for our tuna and takako challenge

Wednesday, 12 April 2017

Dakota: (Art)
I have been learning to
We had to choose a passion and I choose art and my friend ocean choose crafts so we asked whaea Verbena if we could partner up and she said yes so we did
Hard part : to make the diary and 90 second presentation.
The good part is : That me and my friend are working together and nearly finish diary, goal, 90 second presentation. It’s good that I’m working with Ocean because I am shy.
I can : Present this in a nice way with my friend
I need to : keep track of everything.

Tuesday, 11 April 2017

My Anzac project hope you like it!!

So this is mine and my friends Anzac inquiry project. We have been working hard on this so and we have been learning how to write things into our own words that was hard for me because last year I would copy and paste I hope you like it.

Monday, 10 April 2017

My found poem check it out!


This is my found poem it is about mysterious week I hope you like it.

Should kids have to swim?

Should kids have to swim?

Do you want kids drowning in the pool?

Kids can die from drowning they could go and do there own thing and you being focus on the other kids that could drown and you won’t even notice. 3,536 fatal unintentional drowns (non-boating related) but 332 people die from boat accidents each year from drowning. About 5 people a day die from drowning do you want to be 1 of those 5 people. It is usually children 14 and younger that die from drowning.

1.What happens if a kid drowns
Firstly if a kid drowns it is very sad if it’s child or someone else’s because if it was someone else’s. It will be sad for there loss and if it was yours it will be even sadder because you lost a kid. But if save it in time you're really lucky because if you were at the beach and a big wave came and your child drowned when it came you won’t notice in time so be careful.

2.What doctors do
Doctors try really hard to save your child but if they don’t sadly they passed away and they go to the cemetery at a young age. But if they saved your kid that’s great because they are still alive only if every kid or person could stay alive. Because who wants someone to die because I don’t.
I want no one to die because it’s really really sad.

3.So this is why I think people shouldn’t have to swim

I think that everything that I write is what I think because it is really important to me to be safe anywhere and anytime. Because I like people being safe and secure like some people let their kids go to the deep end at the beach because you never know what's going to happen. So keep your kids safe at anytime and anywhere.

For me writing is hard every piece of work I do of writing I feel good when it's done. Sometimes I feel like can exsperess myself through writing.

Tuesday, 4 April 2017

Our passion



Me and ocean have been working on our passion were nearly finished were doing art. It has been challenging for us getting all of our task done.

Tuesday, 28 March 2017

Sun hats writing

Should sun hats
Do you want to prevent yourself from getting melanoma?

New Zealand has the highest rate of melanoma. Over 4000 people are diagnosed with melanoma every year and 300 people a year die because of melanoma. It has lead up to 11 people a day diagnosed with it. Do you want to be one of 11 people diagnosed with melanoma? I agree that all kids in New Zealand should wear sun hats.

1.Fashion statement
Firstly I believe that every kid in New Zealand should wear sun hats. It’s not hard to wear a hat and hats are a fashion statement and you could rock anyway shape or form and you would rock it. It doesn't matter what you look like it’s just to protect you from getting melanoma.

2.Making hats for schools
Secondly I recon that you make better looking hats or hats for schools don’t have hats they would wear them. Well at my school some people don’t wear them because of the way it looks and looks on them. Which they shouldn’t care about especially if you're a boy and like to play sports and if it’s windy the hat will fly right off like it levitated away from your head.

3.What it will lead to
Finally if people don’t wear hats it will lead to skin cancer in other words melanoma. Which is a really unpleasant thing to get especially when you're only a kid. Because it can lead to people passing away and it will be sad if it was a loved one was really close to you. So wear your sunhat or a hat because no one wants melanoma well I don’t so always remember to wear a sunhat or sunscreen.
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So we were learning how to write a introduction and our writing this week was sun hats so we all had to do it on sun hats. It was hard to think of synonyms for words so I struggled on that. Overall I like it and I hope you like it to.